8: writing a thesis for Midsummer essays

The assignment is here.

sample intro 1:

If two people are in love and one thinks love is a crazy adventure and the other thinks love is a way to find contentment in life, the relationship probably won’t work out. The perception a person has with love can determine the way love works for them. According to A Midsummer Night’s Dream, love can be fulfilling or frustrating depending upon the way the person perceives it.

sample intro 2:

Bette Midler, an American singer, once said, ‘Some say love, it is a river.’ What Midler is showing is that there are different ways of seeing love, and those different perspectives might affect the way love works in a person’s life. According to A Midsummer Night’s Dream, love can be fulfilling or frustrating depending upon the way the person perceives it.

sample conclusion:

In the play, how a person sees love determines how he or she experiences it. In today’s world, some people see love as a wild exciting ride, and as a result their love life is more likely to be chaotic; likewise, a person who sees love as a way of finding peace and contentment will have romantic experiences that give them that opportunity. Love usually turns out the way a person looks at it.